The courtroom was quickly filling up with the people of Macomb County, for the Tom Robinson rape case, black vs. white. Atticus has a very tough trial ahead of him. The case was a simple one, considering that Tom was black and racism was still big. The odds were very much against Atticus and Tom, unfortunately. The jury of Macomb didn't want to be the first jury to let a black man accused of rape go free. The case was as simple as black and white.

From Kelsey~ This is a pretty good paragraph but I don’t think that you don’t need to say this case was as simple as black and white at the end okay. Thanks Kelsey from Brian .

From Lukas: This is pretty good, but it has some bad spelling and the statement that the jury to let statement does not make any sense thank you for your time.

From Mr. Davis: I don’t see any direct evidence. Make sure it is set off in quotes. Also, I don’t see much connectivity between your first and last sentences.

From !~*Candice*!~: